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...what your favorite song is. by ~CuriousMushoo:iconCuriousMushoo:





And I wonder what your favorite song is.
Maybe we have something in common and we just don't know it yet but...
suppose there is a chance that I'm what you're looking for
and you're the same to me.
And hey, I bet you'd laugh at my jokes and
I bet I'd think your laugh is infectious and suppose that
maybe there's a possibility that we'd get along and
then maybe we'd have this connection that they say sometimes happens between two people.
And I wonder if we like the same bands and if
you like that part in The Wizard of Oz where the Wizard is revealed
to be nothing more than just a regular ol' guy,
proving that everyone has some kind of curtain around them
shielding who they truly are from the rest of the world.
But hey, maybe I don't want to shield my true self from you and
it's a stretch, but maybe...just maybe you don't want to shield your true self from me
and we just don't know it yet.
And who knows, but maybe I'd like who you really are and it's possible
that you'd like who I really am.
Maybe we'd enjoy each other's company and maybe we both have a soft spot
for classic rock and other such things that remind us of a time long passed that we remember even though were were never part of it.
And maybe I'd love your strange ways, and let's suppose you'd love mine and we could
maybe see something in each other that no one else sees and maybe this would be our little secret.
And maybe we'd feel that strange thing called love grow between us even though the rules of our sex strictly prohibit admitting that emotion beyond the barest of the bare minimum but
maybe that wouldn't matter to us and maybe we'd
break that rule and there's a chance you'd be happier for it, and possibly I'd be happier too.
Because maybe we need to be together and we just don't know it yet and maybe we do know but we just don't how to admit it to each other or what to say if we did and maybe this is what is keeping me from becoming yours and you from becoming mine, but maybe that's not what I want, and there's a chance that's not what you want either but
maybe we'll never know because maybe we are both scared of the outcome...
And I wonder what your favorite song is.
©2004-2009 ~CuriousMushoo
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full title: and I wonder what your favorite song is. damn DA character limits! :shakefist:

so yeah, this is pretty different from anything else in my gallery. i don't know what kind of response it will get from you ll, but i am quite proud of it myself. and yes, i know there are grammatical errors but they are intentional. this is an expiremental style for me. so please enjoy and feel free to leave any comments or critiques. :)

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I love how this one shows both emtion so well but also the confusion and hope of attraction...if that made any sense. Great job! +fav.

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Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow...
:) that's exactly what i wanted to convey. thanks for the comment and :+fav:

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Oh! If I leave any advanced critique it'd be "what LordoftheMorning said" because my brain farted and I can't think of anything knowledgeable to say. So... great stuff as always! Keep up the great work.
It seems as if you and I are on the same *I need a guy* boat. Fun stuff! :)

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I'm overrated, but love me anyways.

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You're cute, can I touch you?
thank you.

"It seems as if you and I are on the same *I need a guy* boat." what?!?! you're gay?!?!?! craziness!

as far as that goes, i'm way too picky to get a guy who i can actually stand, although i have my eye on this one boy right now. which, of course, was the basis for this poem.

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:chew:
you're welcome.

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Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow...
Ahhh!
Yes... I'm gay, go us.
GAY PARTY! :airborne:

Haha, I sort of do that, but I'm also a hopeless romantic (at times) ...so that oftentimes blinds me on "the first date". Like Andrew, uugh, the first date went really well and then I was caught up in everything... he REALLY loved me but as the time progressed, the feeling faded and I saw nothing in him that I wanted... and more things that made me turn away. Like the way a guy tries too hard to impress you with that suckup look on their face.
Arrrrrrgh.
That happens more often then not however, I think I was merely intimidated, that and I barely knew him BEFORE the date.
Alright, I'm done. =D

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I'm overrated, but love me anyways.

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You're cute, can I touch you?
yeah...i have a problem like that. i'll focus on what i DON't like about the guy instead of the things i like. >__<

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:chew:
Yeah, but all the nice guys do :P

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I'm overrated, but love me anyways.

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You're cute, can I touch you?
and all the nice,funny,sweet, hot guys are gay...*le sigh*

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Dream forever
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nice job lover. it is quite different from your other stuff, but it's good.

OH and look what I said to LostTomorrows in y'alls convo...it's so true *sniff*

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Dream forever

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