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Words that bring a smile mean little to suicides
Whispers lost in the breeze running for their lives
Searching for a reason, voices fail to spit
Amber cigarette tip glows as a memory is lit
Sweet roots soaked in vodka rusting bones inside
A tick outside a box, memories feed on the mind

Could not save a friend from a window view
Falling into a trance, deep in love with you
Squeezing pumps of greed, flinching for sex
Drizzled thought vessels, this he regrets
Claustrophobic in smoke needled with his hero
Bejewelled fingers, no gold, now a zero

City lines and pretty diamond lights
Words beneath bruised skin, how love bites
Cleansing happiness pinches a bad nerve
Eyes hold the photographs we never meant to preserve
On the tip of a tongue, love and jealousy combined
All for something that's just in the mind.
©2006-2009 ~CuriousMushoo
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*laurent-stock

blech.

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:iconyouliedanyway:
:wow: this is amazing. :+fav: i'm speechless....

(oh, and i kno how cumb i must sound, but how do you bold...? :slow: )

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"We see the way you righties look at us. But, y'know what? My 10% of the population will rule the world, and righties will be sent to jail!"
~Mr. S
... and the fave-whore strikes again... :mwahaha:
=WordoftheWeek ~PiratesGuild ~weloveslash
:iconfinchygurl99:
Ace poem, Mushoo!

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:iconpsychoticchic27:
yes..tis awesome:fav+:
:hug:
:iconcrazy4you:
nice
i have not written anything worth a damn in a while and its nice to see that some one hasnt lost their touch

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A man once told Voltaire "Life is hard." He replied "Compared to what."
:icongeny:
Beautiful. The words spill so much emotion. I love it, well done. :)
:iconbennettua:
Are you still in Gville?
:iconmittensforthekittens:
great i love it. i just have to add it to my favorites.

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"Every speed on our knees is crawling."
:iconcuriousmushoo:
thanks for the compliment and the :+fav:. :heart:

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:iconmittensforthekittens:
you are very talented. ui love your writing. you're welcome.

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"Every speed on our knees is crawling."

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